Alternate Introduction
Over the years video games has been one of the great center pieces of my life. I've logged countless hours into several video game worlds and I've become attached to several different characters along the way. I've journeyed with them, fought with them, struggled with them, and most importantly I've succeeded with them. People have the common misconception that video games are just a waste of time, but to many its a place of exploration and mystery. There's a sense of joy in a video game world that cannot be matched in any other type of entertainment medium. Through the many video game stories that I've played, I've learned a lot of life lessons. One such lesson came from the highly popular gaming franchise Assassins Creed which is made by Ubisoft. The main character fights for freedom and liberty for all of humanity. He fights to make things right.
Draft 1
This was the first draft for the essay that I made. It is very rough and honestly after reading it I honestly didn't really like it and that's when I decided that I needed to restart and rewrite the essay. I just didn't like where this essay was going and I felt that I was missing something. I didn't really know what it was I just didn't like the way that this essay was heading and I felt it best to restart.
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Draft 2
After I wrote the first draft I knew that I needed to improve on my second draft. For this reason I re-wrote and started basically from scratch in the second draft. Almost two days prior the essay was due I felt that I needed to change the topic completely if I was going to write a successful essay. I just didn't feel confident that my thoughts and analyzing would've come across effective if I kept on writing about Assassins Creed. It was a very tough decision because I basically put away all that prior work I had for nothing, but I think that I made the right move because I just wasn't feeling confident about Assassins Creed as a topic.
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