Brainstorming Ideas
Basically in this part I talked about some of the ideas about what I want to talk about in my paper. A lot of the feedback that I got from my peers were positive and they said that I need to go more in depth in analyzing and give examples to prove my points.
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Draft 1 Process
In the beginning this draft was more difficult than I thought it would be. I knew I wanted to make my paper about cosmopolitan but I was fearful that I wasn't getting my points across that effectively. I felt that I was talking about too much and ideas were just all over the place but there wasn't a clear flow to the essay. As I started writing I started shaving off things that I felt that I didn't need to talk about and I continued to be more specific about points that I felt were more important to the essay.
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