This paper has evolved to become a more specific. Something that I've noticed in anytime that I write, is that I'm pretty general when I first right. After I write more and more I become more specific by putting in examples and becoming less general. I've fixed some punctuation here and there but the content of my paper has been most of the same. I haven't had to make any drastic changes so far. I sort of knew the direction that I was going to go when I first began writing this paper.
What I really like about this paper is that it's about a topic that I've never written about. I've analyzed literature before but I feel that it's a lot more fun to analyze contemporary readings that I personally enjoy to read about. This essay isn't as fun as the first one but it is certainly not a boring one. There isn't much that I dislike about this paper. At first the length seemed pretty long but now I'm worried that I won't be able to have enough space to fit in everything that I want to say, I guess you can say I just started writing and then before I knew it I had almost written too much. I think that my reader will be interested to read about this because I'm being very honest in this paper and I'm not holding back in any of the arguments that I'm saying. It's funny because the magazine that I'm writing about is very blunt, and because of it my essay has taken the tone of being very blunt.
I don't think that I would've done anything differently. I really like the topic that I chose because there is a lot to write about and it's about a magazine that I enjoy reading about. I was pretty lucky and it was pretty easy for me to find secondary sources because people have written journal articles on cosmopolitan and in fact some of them take the same standpoint as me. Overall, I feel very good about this paper and